Thursday, April 26, 2012

Blog #10 - Dialogue to Move the Story Forward

Sorry, this is kind of brief...
ANDREW
Have you ever thought about going back to school? It has been a while since you have gone.

HAYLEY
NO! I will never go back to that rotten place. I can't go there and let people see the way that I look! It would be humiliating!

ANDREW
But you were so popular and everything! Everyone liked you of at least acted like they did. Don't you miss all of your friends?

HAYLEY
Well, yeah. Of course I miss them, but I just don't want to go back. you wouldn't understand...

ANDREW
What wouldn't I understand? I know I have really only known you for about two months, but I feel like it's been so much longer! We spend almost eight hours a day together once I get home from school. Why is it that big of a deal if you go back? What are you afraid of?

HAYLEY
Nothing! I just don't want to be judged like this....

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